Saturday 1 November 2008

Poetry Chapbook 01

01 Hook

There’s a hook in the basement,
dulled by disuse
but bright with expectation
and the promise of
something sweet.

Is that a spot of rust
upon the cool surface
or something more sinister?
Like the missing Aunty Jane
or my Teddy
with the ripped arm?


for Poetic Challenge

7 comments:

spacedlaw said...

Sinister, definitely sinister.

aims said...

Oh my!

Your talent amazes me Rachel. Your dedication to your talent amazes me even more!

Rachel Green said...

It's a poem a day prompt :)

Am I mad?

Thank you both!

Unknown said...

Oh, lovely. A poem a day = madness? My dear, you write three a day already. What's one more?

Rachel Green said...

We'll see if i can keep it up :)

BT said...

That's some committment, Rach. Good discipline though. I felt poetic on the way to Gort this morning in the mist, but failed to get part 2 good start lines!

Rachel Green said...

That's a shame, Gina. With your classical knowledge you'd be a fab poet.