Monday 3 November 2008

Poetry Chapbook 3a


Strange lights flash
under the door
of bedroom four
in the early hours
and the night before.

I saw some blood
and bright blue light
under the door
in the dead of night
(this isn’t right)

I looked today
inside the room -
there’s nothing there
the room is bare
there’s not a lamp
there’s not a stamp
of human feet
or meat



Prompt from read-write-image prompt #2

5 comments:

Unknown said...

Another winner. How are you keeping this up with NANO and everything else?

Rachel Green said...

It's only day 3 - plenty of time to burn out yet!

spacedlaw said...

Creepy! I love it.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you :)

BT said...

I really like this one Rach. I understand it too!!!