Friday 21 November 2008

Walls and Wastrels

Factory Walls.
paths
bleak traffic signs
do this; don't do that.
Sunshine
on
steel towers
full of plastic pellets
and cardboard tubes.




Walls scrawled
with names -
forgotten teens and
footballers too old to play.

Rusted fences padlocked
against children
and the odd vandal
come to smash a window
or get smashed

Smashed
mashed
trashed

a wastrel, wasted
strung out on
cheap lager
and a tenner of H.


That old door
bolted for the last time
while the Old Man's Beard
flourishes
through the new steel fence
that protects the wasteland
from parked cars
rusting.

4 comments:

aims said...

How many times can I say Wow? In how many different ways do you think?

Everything is jolting - look at this picture - get a jolt - at this one - get a jolt.

The world needs to wake up doesn't it!

Rachel Green said...

Thanks Aims.

I rather enjoyed writing that poem.

BT said...

A fine poem, Rach. Indeed, as aims says, it does jolt the senses.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Gina. Nice to have you back :)