Monday 22 December 2008

Virginal Stipulate

Virginal Stipulate


In the halcyon days

of my fragile youth

I came upon an acerbic dreamer

who spoke in nightmares

of knuckle-white restraints.

He was

an open-armed zealot

looking for transcendence

in Jackpot prayers

and double-bonus highways;

an exile from the promised land

and purveyor of damaged souls.

I traded mine for a broken wing

and a parched copy

of Mary’s lost Gospel.





10 comments:

Unknown said...

I love this one so much I don't even know what to say. Your talent is truly awe inspiring.

Rachel Green said...

Thanks :) I was rather pleased with this one, myself.

spacedlaw said...

You should be: It's wonderful.

Rachel Green said...

Thanks hun :)

BT said...

I wish I understood it Rach. I feel unworthy now....

Rachel Green said...

You don't have to understand it to enjoy the cadence :)

Philip Thrift said...

Its word-mixtures (Jackpot prayers and double-bonus highways) make this pure, exciting, poetry.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Philo. I was certainly pleased with it.

Deb said...

Whoa. This was terrific. So many great lines I simply can't choose a favorite.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Deb :)