Wednesday 18 February 2009

Discerning Customer

She stands at the counter
holding two plastic meter cards
and a packet of gum
and a twenty.

“Forty Bensons,” she says
with a nod at the cigarette stand
“and a packet of king-sized rizlas.”

She looks at the total displayed on the till
in black-against-green LEDs
“and five on the gas,” she says,
“and four on the ‘leccy,
and a sherbet dip
for the babby’s tea.”

8 comments:

Jinksy said...

Talk about a sign of our times...you've caught it and no mistake.

Rachel Green said...

Mores the pity!

Thank you :)

aims said...

There'd be more for living if she gave up the death sticks.

DJ Kirkby said...

Oooh dear...far too many women like that where I live. Great water colour though. xo

Rachel Green said...

Thank you both.
Fortunately, I gave up a while ago.

BT said...

You are a very clever girl Rach! Lovely water colour. Don't you just hate it when they display their G Strings? So aptly put though.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Gina.
The delights of Chesterfieldians

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