Monday 16 February 2009

The Teamaker

Dead five years this coming spring
he still remembers tea
grinding acrid leaves in pots
just like he showed to me
Steeped with the hours upon the rim
of coal-fired Aga stove,
a brew to stand your spoon up in
and watch it soon dissolve.
Is that sound a burglar rattling
the hinges on the door?
Or the ghost of Uncle Frederick
making tea at four?

12 comments:

spacedlaw said...

Eeeks. Not my favourite cup of tea...
That type of brew could wake up the dead.

Dave King said...

Loved it!

Rachel Green said...

Indeed it could - and does!

Thanky you both :)

aims said...

'wake up the dead' - very good Spacedlaw!

I can't do that kind of tea either - too strong makes my tummy heart. But plain and hot - yum!

Rachel Green said...

I can't drink it strong, either.

sonia said...

just how i love my tea- very good.

S.L. Corsua said...

Sound and substance meld well in this rhyming piece. I enjoyed reading it over and over. ;) Same feedback for "No 33, Jeeves" which is a fun read.

Found my way here via Breathing Poetry. Glad I did. Cheers.

Rachel Green said...

to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comments :)

Jinksy said...

Thank goodness I don't drink tea!

Rachel Green said...

Few teas are as strong as that!

BT said...

Oh another one to make me laugh. You've gone all macabre, love it. The tea sounds ghastly though, not mine at all (as you know).

Rachel Green said...

Nor mine! I like my tea light!