Saturday 11 April 2009

The Hollow Climbing Tree


I remember when my mother died

and I, an honest Catholic, cried

and, running barefoot along the path

that followed the canal , her laugh

was something that called out to me

though blind with impotent rage I see

with benefit of age, the memory

that haunts me still is of the tree

where I played as a child safe from harm

to come home at night to loving arms

that I could never touch again.

My tears hidden in the rain.





7 comments:

aims said...

Oh my friend. How you've touched my heart with this.

Friko said...

Me too, a long dead mother and a catholic (lapsed), but hey, is one ever? Thanks for the poem.
I have not been blogging for long, so forgive the question: do you write poems daily?
Anything on greed/gluttony you've heard of? The poetry group awaits.
Forgive.

Rachel Green said...

Hi Friko.
On this blog I write a poem and a picture daily, fiction on the other blogs.

I often write of deadly sins.

BT said...

That's so sad and beautifully written Rachel

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Gina

Unknown said...

Oh! So beautiful. You have gifted the world with this.

Rachel Green said...

How sweet of you to say!