Monday 11 May 2009

The Sediment of Willful Sublimation


I excrete prose upon
defenceless students;
and post masticated poems
onto online notice boards
where they drip-drip-drip down the page
leaving slug-trail glazes.

In the morning I guard the jetty
where onomatopoeias crash against a shore
riddled with the bullet holes
of underachieving metaphor;
where adjectives carve a niche among the rocks
and slither into old tombs
from which they refuse to be drawn
into the scorching mosaic
of literary accomplishment.


'Glendalough'
3 ½" x 2 ½"
$25

9 comments:

Unknown said...

Scrumptious.

aims said...

You are a master! Nothing more needs to be said.

sonia said...

very strong. love the last two lines of the first verse. picture brings back memories.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Sonia :)

Unknown said...

Fabulous! (the both)

BT said...

That is just wonderful Rachel. It has to be a favourite. Beautiful painting too.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Stephanie; Gina :)

LORENZO said...

Awesome personification of literary and grammar terms. A special work that made me see them all as little creatures or aliens. I love this one! Honestly the best poem I've read in a long time. Thank you.

Rachel Green said...

Thank you Lorenzo. You honour me.