Friday 6 April 2018

6th April 2018

mostly cloudy
but the sun comes out
morning primrose


© Rachel Green 2018

checking a document
with a new writer's tool

every hundred words.
I am surprised by the number
of hard-to-read sentences.
The meaning is clear,
but they could stand some tidying.
It also points out adverbs
and use of the passive voice.
Handy to have those corrected.
My own little editor.
Trouble is, I now takes me an hour
to write and revise

© Rachel Green 2018
 
 










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